Prologue: Page 33

Personally, I would have improved the pose for the second panel.  It feels a little weird that her body just flips so suddenly into almost a 180 degree thing.  Although for me, it's more so that the second panel feels like it was meant to be a transition panel between panels one and three.  However, it was a panel that pose and/or composition-wise could have been improved to have made it smoother for its supposed transitioning intentions. 

I also think the last panel of this page could have been improved upon.  For me, I would have liked less fire and more focus, composition-wise on the creature and Amelia.  Especially towards the bottom right of the fire, the space feels a little excessive for me, which in turn, made me feel like I wanted to see more of the body of the creature/itself or the pose between a struggling Amelia and the creature. 

Great page, but I feel so bad for Amelia now and then based on the last panel, it looks like it's going to get worse.....